User:Trollny/Afro-Asians/Rug005ucsd Peer Review

General info
Trollny
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Trollny/Afro-Asians
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Afro-Asians

Evaluate the drafted changes
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When reading you draft I noticed that you did bring up good examples and references to the situation regarding Afro-Asians. I would probably say that the structure could be slightly modified, but still looks good. All of your references seem to be from reliable and credible sources.