User:Trollny/Afro-Asians/Salehadian Peer Review

General info
Trollny
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Trollny/Afro-Asians?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Afro-Asians:

Evaluate the drafted changes
The edits to the article provide additional information regarding Afro- Asians, specifically about those in Vietnam. The lead provides an overview of the entire article and doesn't seem to need to be updated with respect to the new addition. The new content is neutral and easy to read. More information could be added about their treatment now, as the current addition focuses on Afro- Vietnamese children born during the Vietnam War.