User:Tropicalspicydisaster/Kāne/WikiMyths5 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tropicalspicydisaster


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Tropicalspicydisaster/Kāne
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Kāne

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

So far there isn't a lot of edits, but it is a good start. I would make it a separate paragraph or a different section. Make sure to add references to anything you are using. I would work on the flow of the article as well. Check grammar and make sure the article is easy to follow. I like where you are going with adding a different version of this myth and I think it is worth expanding.