User:Troyhupper/Hercules beetle/Jpyle02 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Troy Hupper


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Hercules beetle


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hercules beetle

Evaluate the drafted changes
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This article is done very well describing the species, Dynastes hercules, eytomology, taxonomy, distribution and habitat, general description, and life cycle. Overall the tone and voice of the author writing this article is nicely done, and has really good information in the article. This information added made the article more complete and has very good descriptions about the lifecycle and diet/behavior sections. However, discussing more about this morphological traits and taxonomy of this animal in the taxonomic section would strengthen this article significantly. The sources used are a little older however, I think that they are still useful for working on this article. The eytomology section seems semi out of place, I suggest adding this to a different section, maybe the general description section. However, really nice work!