User:Troyhupper/Hercules beetle/Kayleehussey Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Troyhupper


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Troyhupper/Hercules_beetle?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Hercules beetle

Evaluate the drafted changes
Looks like you have a good start. For those changes you plan to make, I would plan to add them to your lead cause the lead of the original article looks a little brief. I think it would also be beneficial to add to other sections other than the diet and description sections to make the article more complete. For example, there isn't much about reproduction. There is information about life cycle but not how they reproduce. Are there courting behaviors? I do like how the article links to other articles for terminology. There are also some good pictures in there and I think you could strengthen the article by adding some more, particularly under the taxonomy section. The relationship to the environment section could use a little more detail, such as describing particular mechanisms. In the relationship to humans section, are there any cultural, economic, or scientific significance that this beetle has? It says it doesn't "negatively" impact humans but perhaps it has some benefits? Overall, I think the article has a good tone. It appears to remain neutral.