User:TruLegend3/Jordan shoes/KDunn2022 Peer Review

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TruLegend3


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 * Air Jordan - Wikipedia
 * Air Jordan - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

No, the lead has not been updated because no peer review has been added.

Yes, the lead includes an introductory sentence that explains what Air Jordans are and who produces them.

The lead does not include a brief description of the article’s major sections, but it does give a brief description of the history.

The lead includes Michael Jordan and his time with the Chicago Bulls. The lead includes the three designers of the Jordan shoes.

The lead is very concise.

There is no content added this is relevant to the topic.

There is no added up-to-date content.

The content that I believe is missing is the history of Michael Jordan and why he was chosen to represent Air Jordan. The impact Jordan shoes have on the youth, black communities, and other races.

The article does not deal with one of Wikipedia’s equity gaps nor does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics. It does mention the issues in manufacturing with Indonesian, Vietnamese, and Chinese workers going on strike for either an issue with wages or hazardous working conditions.

No content was added to the article, but the original article remains neutral.

There are no claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position.

There are no added viewpoints that are overrepresented or underrepresented.

No added content attempts to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another.

There is no new content added that is backed up by a reliable secondary source of information.

There is no content added that accurately reflects what the cited sources say.

No thorough sources were added so therefore, they do not reflect the available literature on the topic.

No sources were added so I can’t check if to see if they are current.

No sources were added so I can’t check to see if they were written by a diverse spectrum of authors or if they include historically marginalized individuals possible.

I found a peer-reviewed source titled "It’s Gotta Be The Shoes”: Youth, Race, and Sneaker Commercials by Brian Wilson and Robert Sparks

No new content was added so I cannot check to see if it’s well written, concise, clear, or has grammatical errors and is well organized.

My peer did not add any images or media.

This article can be improved by adding the history of Michael Jordan, the meaning of the Jordan symbol, and the impact of Jordan shoes on the youth, black communities, and other races.