User:Tsang Karl/Ketone Halogenation/Hotdawgluver420 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Basketball2023, Tsang Karl, Jessica M79


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tsang%20Karl/Ketone_Halogenation?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ketone halogenation

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello!

- good overall flow of information, subheadings make it easy to follow

- "conventional methods" is subjective, perhaps specify what it means to be conventional?

- some figures/images will help with reader's understanding of mechanisms

- neutral tone consistent throughout article

very good start I look forward to seeing the final product :)