User:Tsang Karl/Ketone Halogenation/Sliverash Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tsang Karl


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Tsang Karl/Ketone Halogenation


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ketone halogenation

Evaluate the drafted changes
The update of the content of the article is well written with reliable source and neutral tone. However, with such large amount of new content added, a Lead should be added as guideline. It seems like there is a tendency of adding a Lead but have not done it yet. Sections and subsections are definitely needed for better outline but have not added to the draft. Paragraph in Application of Green Chemistry may be too condensed but could improved by spliting it into multi-paragraph. Format of the reference needed to be correct but the in-text citations are well-done. Little errors in chemical formulas also needed to be aware that numbers should be subscripted.