User:Tsrealestatepro/sandbox

I will expand on the Modern Era with a twist.
A study involving clients in a twelve-step treatment program explored the role of self‑reflection through diary writing, not only as daily therapy, but in a retrospective context. The study concluded that clients who read and reflected on their past diary entries demonstrated increased participation in the treatment program.

 Scientific Study of Self Reflection and Sobriety 

A study involving clients in a twelve-step treatment program explored the role of self‑reflection through diary writing, not only as daily therapy, but in a retrospective context. The study concluded that clients who read and reflected on their past diary entries demonstrated increased participation in the treatment program. The 12 step program is based on self reflection and the accountability of actions past. In the article by Mitchell Friedman, the author indicates that success on ones recovery relies on self reflection.

Review from Sharon and Lauren

 * It would be helpful if you added the original article so we could see how your addition fits in with it.
 * Grammar and tone is wiki worthy
 * Try to expand more on the study and give context (Name of study etc.)

Reference
1. Stephenson, Geoffrey M, and Nikolaos Zygouris. "Effects of Self Reflection on Engagement in a 12-step Addiction Treatment Programme: A Linguistic Analysis of Diary Entries." Addictive Behaviors 32.2 (2007): 416-24. Web.Tsrealestatepro (talk) 00:00, 15 October 2019 (UTC)

2. Friedman, Mitchell. "The 12 Steps of Addiction Recovery Programs as an Influence on Leadership Development: A Personal Narrative." International Journal for Transformative Research 3.2 (2016): 15-23. Web.

Review from Kerv and Chris
The tone of the contributions correctly matches Wiki standards, or somewhere near it. Just make the contribution more clear.

Review from Matheus and Brooke
The first source is the Wikipedia page that you are working on so that isn't reliable. Second source looks great, recent, and credible. Placement looks like it is being added to the end of modern era which is no problem. Looks like some useful and great information. I would just work just a bit on the wiki tone, but overall sounds decent.

Review from Ahmad, Melissa and Hannah
The last sentence should be a new paragraph about the study. Specifications of the study? Use of wikipedia page on self reflection as a source for a contribution to that page is not a valid source of contribution. Sounds good but id find the source to where that contribution on the unconscious mind came from.