User:Ttipton20/Atlantic slave trade/Annabellecrtrt Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ttipton20


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ttipton20/Atlantic_slave_trade?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Atlantic slave trade

Evaluate the drafted changes
Writer has a great lead and introduces the topic well. New, relevant information is provided. The new information makes sense and is free of errors. Peer did not choose to add pictures, as the information needed to be told was enough. Content can be improved by explaining more in your own words. The writer did a great job of keeping it neutral and I did not feel like he choose a side. Relabel credited sources were present, and allowed thoughts to be valid.

Thank You Annabelle for your peer review.