User:Tuatarasallthewaydown/Female Peronist Party/Oaklandstudent Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tuatarasallthewaydown


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Tuatarasallthewaydown/Female Peronist Party


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Female Peronist Party

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead was not besides a grammatical change to make the sentence and information more clear. The content has been changed beneficially, adding more information and helping cover the gap in information which existed due to the movements limited scope, while adding important context to the movement within Argentina during this period, and what this organization was doing during this period. The tone seems to match both the original tone and is conducive to an educational and informative tone which is expected of Wikipedia. There isn't a particular point of view represented by this article, but if the information was available, getting information about the feelings and views of both the male-dominated Peronist party on the organization as well as the female opposition to this party would help us understand some more context about the information. The sources look fine, and relevant to the topic. It is very well organized and fitting to the expectations of Wikipedia. Overall very strong and needs little improvement and is fitting to the topic.