User:Tuatarasallthewaydown/Female Peronist Party/Swiftluvr222 Peer Review

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tuatarasallthewaydown


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 * Female Peronist Party

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Megan's lead offers good background of the Female Peronist Party, who created it, and what it was about. I would add one or two more sentences in the lead to talk about the disbandment of the party, since that is one of the subsections this article talks about.

I think the information in the history section gives a good background to the party and how/why it was formed. I don't think that section needs any more work to be done. In the subsection "Origins and Work" there is a lot of information about the female basic units which I think gives good background to the women that were involved in this party. However, I think there could be a bit more of a connection back to the PPF after this description. If you can, maybe add a few sentences about how this helped the women in the PPF and what these units did for the party. Did it help the party's image? <- Answering questions like that could help provide a bit more information to connect the female basic units to the PPF.

The tone used in the paragraphs written are not biased and very to the point. This draft is merely a description of what the Peronist party was, how it was formed, and why it disbanded. I think this draft does its job very effectively. Most of the ideas I felt were underrepresented were aforementioned and can be fixed with small changes. However, another idea that could be expanded on is the party under both Juan Perón and Delia Parodi after Eva Perón passed away. I'm unsure how much information is available on that but it couldn't hurt to add some information if there is any. There were no ideas that were overrepresented that I could see. The sources used are reliable and presented accurately.

The structure of the article is well organized, as it moves chronologically throughout the origins of the party through to the end of it.