User:Tucker28/Ukrainian mafia/Kelseymanchester Peer Review

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Tucker28
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Ukrainian mafia
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Evaluate the drafted changes
I really liked the additional proposed topics for the Table of Contents including the war, terminology, operations and structure. It adds more information for the reader allowing for more understanding of the topic as a whole. One aspect of the article that had been somewhat confusing was the structure of the "In Popular Culture" section. The article had went from paragraph format to then bullet points which was confusing to readers. In addition, there was no conclusion section which ties everything together. I feel as though for the final product, there should be a change in structure allowing for more flow of the writing and increasing understanding of the reader on the mafia. The updated bibliography looked strong and was structured accordingly. Overall, there is still some additional information needing to be added in order to perfect the article, but it is currently at a very good place with work that has been produced being extremely strong!

Peer review #2 12/6:

Overall article is still strong. Only thought that still remains is regarding the sources. I would double check to make sure they are valuable and in order. In addition, be sure to list them in alphabetical order.

Article is well-written so far and I cannot wait to see the final product!