User:Tugrasi/Erol Güngör/Snazzy780 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tugrasi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Tugrasi/ Erol Gungor


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, your article is really interesting and I enjoyed reading it!

Lead: I think the lead would be stronger if you more directly stated why Gungor was important in the history of psychology.

Content: The content was thorough in terms of what Gungor did in Turkey, I did however notice that there were a few times that I got lost in wording. I might consider going through to make sure things are presented concisely to increase transparency.

Resources: I did notice that you had three secondary resources but the remaining resources were written by Gungor himself. Perhaps consider finding an additional secondary source to increase reliability?