User:Tuh20608/Shinto shrine/Jameststurner Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tuh20608


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Tuh20608/Shinto shrine


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Shinto shrine

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
The lead looks good. Much of the extra information that was present in the original iteration of the article has been re organized to help make the lead shorter and more concise.

Content
The content added was relevant to the topic of Shinto shrines and accurately describes the tradition of shikinen sengū-sai (the regular destruction and rebuilding of shrines).

Tone and Balance
The content added to this section is natural but it might benefit from a little more context. There are great examples of this tradition but not much on why this destruction/reconstruction process takes place. Is it religiously significant? Is it a matter of the structural integrity of the shrines?

Sources and References
I see references at the bottom of the page but none inserted into the text.

Organization
The content is explained well and is easily digestible.

Images and Media
The imagery seems to use the pictures from the original article. I do like how you have inserted all of the links into your article to help provide the reader with examples of shrines that use shikinen sengū-sai.