User:Tuj26588/Yours Truly (band)/JoeGould123 Peer Review

General info
(provide username) Tuj26588
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tuj26588/Yours_Truly_%28band%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Yours Truly (band)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

After reviewing Tuj26588's drafted changes, the key changes so far have been the addition of another album that the band Your's Truly had released that wasn't included in the original wikipedia page, as well as a singe that wasn't included. The content has definitely been better developed, however grammar, phrasing and inclusion of citations and wiki-links could be the next thing to be improved upon.