User:Tuj36557/Cult image/Josephrkopta Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Tuj36557


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Tuj36557/Cult image


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cult image

Evaluate the drafted changes
I'm basing this feedback on the draft that you have in this sandbox: User:Tuj36557/Cult image

The first thing you should do is take a look at the talk page for Cult Image, if you haven't already. It looks like there are some useful conversations about what should and should not be in this article, which could be useful for you as you complete your draft. You should also write on the talk page, introducing yourself there (saying you're a student working on updating this article for this class) and explaining what you're intending to do or what you've already done.

Lead & Content
This additional paragraph looks good, but it needs references throughout to back up the statements. I've put in "citation needed" tags after every place where one should go.

The content you've added is good – the Cross and Dharma Wheel – but again, you need to insert citations after every new assertion you make leading back to the place where you found that information.

Images and Media
In a later draft, you may want to include a new image. The training module on images and media will be helpful for determining this.