User:Tuk58925/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Body camera

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this topic because it is something that has become increasingly relevant over the past couple of years with the increase in publicized police brutality. The subject matters because it is important to holding the police accountable. It is also really cool technology that can be used for all kinds of entertainment/educational purposes.

Evaluate the article
The lead section is fine, but I do think it could use some organizing. I do think that the article is missing some crucial information that would be relevant to the topic at hand. I think the language used in this article could be improved, it lacks neutrality in some places, and is somewhat disorganized There are places in the article that seem less than objective. I think it is off to a good start, but I think it can be fleshed out way more. I would say the article is somewhat underdeveloped.