User:Tul10616/Aniconism in Judaism/Tuo68169 Peer Review

General info
Tul10616
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tul10616/Aniconism_in_Judaism?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
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The edits made by user Tul10616 seem to add valuable and new information to the article. I do believe these sentences could be made a bit more consise; for example combining similar sentences and improving some wording, fixing a typo, etc. I also think a few more sources to verify the information would help, especially inline citations, but overall the arguments are strong.