User:Tun39057/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
The article I am evaluating is titled "Cryptocurrency."

Cryptocurrency

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because Cryptocurrency is a very popular topic right now. I do not know a lot about crypto but want to start investing so I figured this article/assignment would be a good way for me to learn about it. I think this article matters because it is a hot topic but many people don't really understand it or how it works. My first impression of the article is that it is a very detailed article but thee is still room for improvement.

Evaluate the article
Overall, I think the lead section is pretty good. I think most of the key information about Cryptocurrency is listed. There is just some sentence structure I would move around/delete as well as some grammar corrections. In terms of the content, for the most part it is up to date. I would consider adding in NFT's somewhere under Blockchain because that is where they are both recorded and they go hand in hand. I would also consider adding the Metaverse either under Economics or Impacts and analysis. I don't think they need their own sections but they are worth touching on. For tone and balance, majority of the article is neutral but there are some biased sentences. For sources and references, a lot of facts are not backed up by secondary sources so I will address that. For the most part the sources are up to date and the links do work. The organization the article is very good already, I would say. There are a few images already but more could be added. There are discussions on the Talkpage of what could be added and other things that are missing. Overall, I think the article right now is solid. I believe all of the basic information is there and it is organized very well. I will look to build open what is already there and go more in depth. I will also find secondary sources to back up the facts already mentioned. Lastly, I want to make sure it is up to date with all the latest information about Cryptocurrencies.