User:Tun46168/Iranian women and Persian music/Niolzc Peer Review

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For the Persian classical music section, it does not have a reliable sources. It might be better if It could include the most important female singer Qamar ol-Molouk Vaziri's biography.

And also, is it possible to putting some information about Ghashang Kamkar and Gorgin Mousissian?