User:Tun90324/Political law/Tuo76466 Peer Review

General info
Tun90324
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Political law
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Political law

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good job making the language more clear and easier to read. I feel like more sources may help to strengthen the article. Also, "Pay-to-Play" is mentioned in the final paragraph, so be sure it links to the related Wikipedia article.