User:Tun97369/Sensation (art exhibition)/KyreTia Peer Review

Peer review of Sensation (Art Exhibit)

Lead information:

- I find the lead information interesting for many reasons. For example, I agree that you suggested to add more details in the intro. However I don’t think it’s the best choice to explain why the exhibit was “controversial.” This is an opinion and information regarding specific opinions might create bias to viewers who do not think the art is inappropriate etc.

Body:

- I also appreciate the idea to add more images regarding the text. I’m curious to see which ones you are interested in choosing for the article. I second that images shouldn’t be from the same source as a better article would have more information from multiple trustworthy sources.

Notes:

- Great start, I also appreciate the sources under the source tab of your sandbox.

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