User:Tun97369/Sensation (art exhibition)/Llgilpin03 Peer Review

General info
tun97369
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Tun97369/Sensation (art exhibition) - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Sensation (art exhibition) - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think adding to the lead section by explaining why the show was controversial is a good idea. I would keep it brief, as to not give away too much information in the beginning, but just enough to make the reader want to continue reading. I think making the lead more detailed would take away from the article's body, but that's just my opinion.

I think adding a few more images would add to the quality of the article, since it is about an art show. I wouldn't add too many, but maybe just a few more. I also think adding images from different sources from different locations is a good idea.

I agree with you and think that the Berlin section could use more. When reading, I wondered why it had such a small section compared to the other two cities mentioned.

I think updating the references would help make sure they're all reliable.

I think the content in the original article is fairly neutral considering the polarizing views on the show. I would just keep that neutrality when adding to the article.