User:Tuo68169/Vandalism/Lauteur02 Peer Review

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Tuo68169
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Tuo68169/Vandalism
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Vandalism

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Tuo68169 has currently drafted 6 sources that they will potentially use in their article. On the article page it says the article is lacking corresponding inline citations for the sources that are already there- I wonder if Tuo68169 has noticed this and if they are planning on fixing some of the issues there. It seems like a lot of the citations already on the article only have the author and date of the book or citation in the bibliography. I'm sure Tuo68169 can look up what the article may be citing and include further information on the existing citations (title, publisher, ISBN, etc.) to further improve the article, along with the citations and information Tuo68169 plans to add to the article in their drafted bibliography.