User:Tuo68169/Vandalism/Soniakilcoyne Peer Review

General info
Tuo68169
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Tuo68169/Vandalism
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Vandalism

Evaluate the drafted changes
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So far the user does not have anything written for the article in their sandbox, and it seems like they have made no edits to the article itself. They do have a short list of sources within their sandbox. I would suggest that the user take those sources and work them into the article, whether that be through adding more content or inserting those sources into existing paragraphs. They can start by selecting subsections that are shorter than others and beef them up with new content and sources.