User:Turny1516/Scottish sword dances/DeadlineBreaking Peer Review

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Turny1516
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The information is pretty easy to understand, the only thing I would reword is the sentence below:

"...with the King Malcom the 3rd when he killed a rival chieftain and proceeded to celebrate by dancing over both men's swords".

I'm having a little trouble understanding the sentence but it may just be because I'm reading it out of context. Looks great otherwise