User:Turny1516/Scottish sword dances/Uilleam1 Peer Review

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Turny1516
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 * User:Turny1516/Scottish sword dances
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 * Scottish sword dances

Evaluate the drafted changes
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This was a really good addition, it adeed a lot to the overall continuity of the section on origin; and especially to the lead section. No comments other than looks great!