User:Turtlehong/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Beehive Cluster

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I didn't know what beehive clusters were and was interested in getting to know more about them. My preliminary impression was that the article was despite the lead section containing some information that could have been added to the main article, it was well-organized and the links to the sources and citations worked.

Evaluate the article
The lead section could have been more concise if it stopped at the first paragraph; the remaining two could be information added in the main paragraph. The content was relevant and well-researched. Although many of the resources used are from over ten years ago, the page was last edited this year too. Some sources cannot be reached and only show abstracts. But they are related to the content. The images are captioned and reflect the content. There were good responses to all the questions in the talk page. Overall strengths are content and pictures. More current sources and working source links would help the article be improved.