User:Tvhoang2021/Tumor suppressor/Dimccall Peer Review

Peer Topic Review
First off, I think the page is well organized and you seem to talk about all the major points concerning tumor suppressors in great detail. I do not have the biological background to comment on the accuracy of the information but I can confidently say it has a very neutral stance attached to it. I also really liked all the images you added to the page. I am a big visual learner so it was immensely helpful when trying to understand your topic.

The edits I think you should make are as follows. First, make sure when inputing references it follows the style laid out in the two-hit hypothesis. Second, think about adding hyperlinks to words in your respective paragraphs that can take readers to additional wikipedia pages. This could help someone like me with little background on tumor suppressor genes facilitate my learning a bit more. Third, while I loved the images you used, a few more images on the latter parts of the page would be awesome. Lastly, just make sure you proofread the whole thing before submitting. There are occasional spelling errors and missing words. Additionally, I want to echo Anna's suggestion of trying to simplify your sentences to avoid wordiness. That would go a long way in making the page professional.