User:Twalton1996/Reverse psychology/Whit873M Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Twalton1996


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Twalton1996/Reverse_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Reverse psychology
 * Reverse psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
Under the Among Children section of the article there is a sentence where "teenage" should be replaced with "teenager". I agree with the re-wording of how manipulation takes place, the new sentence seems more neutral than the original. ''In the sentence "Questions have however been raised about such an approach when it is more than merely instrumental, in the sense that "reverse psychology implies a clever manipulation of the misbehaving child"." wouldn't there need to be a verifiable source? I see that the one that was there previously is now marked out, but I feel as if since there's a quote there should be a source behind it. Lastly, per instructor comments taking away the quotes in the example as she says they aren't needed. I think you have good bases to contributions and it flows well with the existing article.''