User:Tykerriagrey/Developmental language disorder/Caitlincaterinichia Peer Review

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User:Tykerriagrey
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 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tykerriagrey/Developmental_language_disorder?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
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 * Developmental language disorder

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Hello!

I did not see any edits or add-ons within your sandbox so maybe you put them elsewhere or within the article that I did not see. I have glanced over this article and found it very interesting! I did notice that certain sections like Relationship with other neurodevelopment disorders were quite small so you might find luck with new information you can add to this and add some new sources to the references column. I thought the Benchmarks for children with developmental language disorder section was actually very helpful with understanding the timing of developmental language disorder and how this can progress in children. You could possibly even expand this section after the five year old marker and progress it into 6-10 ages and how this portrays itself as children enter school!