User:Tykerriagrey/Developmental language disorder/Nguyenmt1732 Peer Review

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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Developmental language disorder

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Hi!

The article is very well-organized and each section goes over specific areas related to developmental language disorder. Each section has substantial amount of information and goes over information that someone might need or be curious about. The different areas of developmental language disorder like factors, treatments, assessments, etc., show that the article has a nice structure and people are able to go to a specific section that they are particularly interested in. The article is also well sources, since it has a considerable amount of sources. I think an area that you could help improve would be the research and prevalence sections, because it is not as well developed as the other sections. It might be easier to find more information to add to those sections. I know that adding information to something that is already well developed is hard!

I was not able to see your draft, so I just wanted to point out a few areas that you might want to add to, if you have not already added on to a section.