User:TylerBoni/sandbox

Article Evaluation
Article I worked on: Dayton Wings (Dayton Wings (basketball team))

My evaluative notes:

-Add visuals such as pictures

-Add more than just a summary paragraph

-More details of the team, its players, and their games

-Structure it more like other professional sports team articles

-List players, coaches, affiliates, etc.

-More information in general

-History of the WBL (the league the team existed in)

-Make the article more pleasing to the eye

-Currently no bias problems

-Currently no broken source links

-Currently no false information

-There's nothing inherently wrong with the article as of now it could just be improved

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Article Proposal and Bibliography
I will again be sticking with the Dayton Wings (basketball team) page to do my edits on. I found this page using the "random page" tool and noticed it was rather undeveloped. Using my available resources I believe I can turn the article into a much better page than how it currently stands. Some of the things I plan to do include adding pictures and other imagery. As of right now the article has no pictures or anything other than text. Another plan I have is to develop the structure of the page to match other sports team pages. While it won't be a direct copy, I think mocking the style of a more developed sports page would help it gain some legitimacy in the long run. Lastly and most importantly, I need to add more information in general. The page doesn't have much going for it right now information wise so adding any little thing I can find will help a lot.

Resources:

http://go.galegroup.com/ps/i.do?&id=GALE|A174936452&v=2.1&u=indi68545&it=r&p=AONE&sw=w&authCount=1

http://go.galegroup.com/ps/i.do?&id=GALE|A313309218&v=2.1&u=indi68545&it=r&p=ITOF&sw=w

https://search.proquest.com/docview/753210593?accountid=11652&rfr_id=info%3Axri%2Fsid%3Aprimo

Vetter's Feedback
OK. I think the key here is really going to be sources. The ones you have listed don't actually provide much information (at least that's what it seems like on first glance). Are there newspapers or reputable websites that could draw from? Other sources? I think we need to be sure of this before finalizing the article choice. Remind me to go over how images work on Wikipedia - they need to have a certain kind of copyright and I can show you how to proceed during our conference tomorrow. I would really try to hunt for some sources to make sure you will have enough content to add to this article. Good start on this. We'll talk more during our conference. -Dr. V

Article Draft Sandbox
Here's a link to my article draft page: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:TylerBoni/sandbox/articledraft