User:TylerOliver7/Stadium Bowl/Jiyenita Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TylerOliver7


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:TylerOliver7/newsandbox
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Stadium Bowl

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hello Tyler! here's my review on your article so far. I think you have found many information regarding the performing acts and events held in the stadium through the years. I think adding the most notable events/acts in the Lead would be a great highlight.

- I would suggest adding a History section in your article if there's any? It is written that the stadium opened in 1910 so there should be stuff that happened in the stadium in the past century, such as the flooding that you mentioned in the draft.

- Also how the design or the construction of the stadium is like? or add information if the stadium has been renovated through the years (ex: how much it costs, what changes).

- I would also suggest to add pictures of the stadium in the past if there's any

- maybe add who the stadium's owned by?