User:TylerOliver7/Stadium bowl/Iskang15 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TylerOliver7


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:TylerOliver7/newsandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Stadium Bowl

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hi Tyler! Nice job on the article so far, and based on your contributions, this article has a lot potential to be a really good one. Some of the things I have noted in the peer-review include:


 * Due to the importance of having a Lead in an article, I think having a sort of short introduction/description about the Stadium Bowl can be very beneficial for the readers.
 * In comparison to other notable stadiums and their wiki articles, they commonly have a "History" section discussing crucial events that have contributed towards the current establishment.
 * Maybe it can be more beneficial to have its own section with what you have contributed already.
 * Some possibilities for more content could include how the stadium came to be, or even commemorations.
 * There could also be an "Event" section, again based on other stadium articles and what you have contributed already, specifically involving major sports events that have occurred within the stadium.
 * These can include finals, conventions, etc.
 * Images can provide readers a sense of scale for the Stadium Bowl, which can be beneficial.