User:Tyler Borschnack/Nancy Carrasco/Debat012 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username)Tyler Borschnack
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Tyler Borschnack/Nancy Carrasco

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? no
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? no
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? no
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? could use more detail

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? the sources added were relevant
 * Is the content added up-to-date? all sources were up to date
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? all sections seem like there is content that is missing or things that could be added

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? content is neutral
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? seems unbiased!
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? no
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? no

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? new no content added other than sources
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? sources are good!
 * Are the sources current? sources are current
 * Check a few links. Do they work? yes, the sources work

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? very easy to read and clear
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? no spelling errors that I have seen
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? no new content

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?

Overall evaluation
There have been no new revisions on the article itself or revisions on the draft other than new sources. There is not much written about this women and I think the article would benefit from some new content in the sections as well!