User:Tylerharris33/Sport communication/Hunter.browne Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

DrCooper9


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tylerharris33/Sport_communication?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sport communication

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, I think that his additions will be great for the article. Non-verbal sports communications is huge, and there is not any mention of that in the main article. I think that these additions are a good start, but I believe that just building off of them will be important. I did notice that one of the sources was from the article itself, and I would recommend adding a more reliable source. I also would continue to be adding more sources until you reach at least the ten required. There is not anything in the lead yet, so I think that adding to that will be important, but I know that this is a rough draft. The sources were not letting me access them, but I think it is my computer that is not letting me do it. They are credible, but like I said, continue to add to it. It is also very easy to read. It is not overly complex that it confuses you more than it informs you. The final thing is that all the information is without bias. It is just stated facts backup with the sources. That is important to keep it as bias free as possible, and he accomplished this.