User:Tylerharris33/Sport communication/Jblight Peer Review

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TylerHarris33


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Great work Tyler! I thought your choice on sport communication was an extremely interesting topic. The different paths and avenues that can arise throughout sports and their communication was interesting. I found it interesting the different opportunities afforded to those and how some of the biggest names in sports have taken advantage of that opportunity. I thought that the references you added were important and helped add to the original article. I would however like to see some more updated sources from more recent of times. I also think it could valuable to analyze how sports communication differs from traditional communication, and what really makes the two different. In all, great work and I look forward to seeing what you do next!