User:Tylosaurus1248/Evaluate an Article

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Petrarch

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I chose this article because Petrarch and his letters were an important discussion topic in my Italian Renaissance class. We explored, at length, the themes he chose to address, and how his conscious attempts to revive the study of ancient Greek and Roman societies and literature helped create the Italian Renaissance as a political project. From a preliminary view, the article does appear to address many of the key topics well - his life, biographical events, and contents of his letters.

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(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

Lead section: the article's first few sentences summarize key aspects of the article, particularly his literary work and influence on the Italian Renaissance and the development of the modern Italian language. The lead is concise and limits itself to information that is covered in the article. That said, the lead section does not go into as much detail on his biography as could be useful - the biography section is a decent chunk of the article, but does not receive much description in the lead.

Content: The article's content is relevant to the topic of Petrarch, summarizing his life details, works, philosophy, and legacy, and broadly seems up-to-date. However, there are some areas where its coverage is incomplete or needs broadening. For example, the article asserts that the mummified cat in Petrarch's last house was actually Petrarch's cat without a citation, but a brief Google search for "Petrarch's cat" turns up several articles (https://www.jstor.org/stable/40025839, https://blogs.bl.uk/european/2018/12/not-petrarchs-cat.html) that point out that a cat never appears in Petrarch's works and that the cat was probably a later fictional invention. The "Legacy" section could also probably benefit from some reworking and expansion to make the connection more explicit between his philosophy and later references to him.

Tone and balance: the article discusses multiple points of view on Petrarch's work, and mostly does not give undue weight to one point of view or unduly highlight minority / fringe POVs. The article mostly does not appear to push a specific perspective. The "Dante" section, however, is an analytical interpretation and comparison of Petrarch to Dante, and could benefit from different perspectives. There are also some "weasel words" such as "is considered by many to be the father of the Renaissance" (this has a citation, but could be more useful to say who is doing the considering).

Sources and references: As noted above, some claims in the article are made without citations, and require further attribution (for another example, see the comment on musical settings during Petrarch's lifetime. Many of the sources are good sources (from peer-reviewed literature or books), but they could benefit from updating and further addition to ensure that all the claims in the article are properly covered.

Organization: The article is divided into clear sections and is broadly easy to read and understand.

Images and media: generally appear to illustrate the article well and are laid out in a visually appealing fashion.

Talk page discussion: arguments on the page focusing on some occasional vandalism, language and nationality, and the aforementioned weasel words. The article is rated as a C class vital article in the category "people".

Overall: the article does a good job with most of the basics - providing an overview of who Petrarch was and what he wrote. However, the article needs a more rigorous fact-checking and citation review, addition of some better sources, and perhaps some expanded discussion of his legacy.