User:Tylosaurus1248/San Pier Maggiore, Florence/JSMoskowitz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Tylosaurus1248


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tylosaurus1248/San_Pier_Maggiore,_Florence/JSMoskowitz_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * San Pier Maggiore, Florence

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I do not see anything on the draft, so I'll just review the article as it is.

The article is very short so there's definitely a lot that is possible to add. It could be good to go into depth on the layout of the church because there isn't really much about it. Maybe also design details of its construction/architects if that is available. The article is succinct but doesn't yet have too much detail.