User:Tyrcles/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title: Preventive Nutrition
 * Article Evaluation: Wikipedia flagged this article for improvement due to it being written like a personal or argumentative essay. I also chose this article because it hasn't been edited it over a year. Some of the arguments in the article are very opinionated and also lack context. For example "With this popularization these type of foods also increased the digestions of high amounts of sugar, sodium and high fatty foods which have a lower nutrient-density value that can have great adverse effects on health." This line is lacking context. Just because the food is high in these macro nutrients doesn't automatically lead to it being unhealthy. Its missing the context of micro nutrients and macro profiles such as favorable lipid profiles.:
 * Sources: https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC8728510/:
 * Sources: https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC8728510/:

Option 2

 * Article title Diet and longevity:
 * Article Evaluation: The article is very short and missing a lot of information. Only covers Fasting and Calorie restriction and doesn't explore them deeply. I believe this article needs some more diets and information added along with a plentiful of citations due to the vast majority of research out there. I personally would add Keto and explore the topic of its anticancer effects and :
 * Sources: https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC6375425/
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC5609489/:

Option 3

 * Article title: Dietary diversity :
 * Article Evaluation: Only two small paragraphs and I believe it misrepresents dietary diversity. It ended with it leading to overweight and increased mortality. Miss using sources such as https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC7230563/ which in the article was linked with"an increased mortality" but the article's conclusion is "Eating a variety of foods might be recommended for longevity among Japanese community dwellers" which is the complete opposite of what it says in the wiki.:
 * Sources: https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC7230563/ (Its a good article that supports but it was used wrong)
 * https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/30104730/
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC7696452/