User:Tyswitzer/Sneaker collecting/Dyaffa Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tyswitzer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tyswitzer/Sneaker_collecting?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sneaker collecting

Evaluate the drafted changes
This topic is super interesting and definitely not something I would've thought of. I believe that the insight that you are able to put into this article is well thought out and the edits that you have made are clear and thorough. One thing that I would suggest doing is potentially describing some of the terms that you use in the paragraph like "sneakerhead" to those that are unfamiliar with the term or page in general that are trying to get a better understanding of the shoe world. Overall, I believe that your topic and editing are very interesting and I am looking forward to reading the final project when it is done!