User:Tytygo/South African English/Brian redmond jr Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tytygo, Zohaib Alvi, Lramir54, Zabdu2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tytygo/South_African_English?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The information provided on what BSAE is is really detailed and thorough. I think that this part is really done well because the audience has a clear understanding of the how the language is different than normal English. I like the information about the two different varieties such as "acrolect" and "mesolect" is added as well because it gives more insight as to what the language is. This would also help anyone trying to learn the language since they would be able to choose which version they want to get into. The links connected to key words helps keep the article smooth when it comes to telling the information and provide the audience with further research if they want to dive into it. Your Phonology section is well informed and the provided examples really drives it home. The only advice I would give about it is organizing the examples so it's not merged into one line so it would be more easy to follow. Your Grammar and History section is well done like the rest of the article, but for the grammar maybe posting a image of BSA's ipa chart might be helpful? Also providing more examples on how the grammar structure is different than English would show how the two are different more easily. Having the links of references in the History area is a good idea. In all, this article provides well detailed information about BSAE in a neutral form.