User:Tytygo/South African English/Iur444 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tytygo, Zohaib Alvi, Lramir54, Zabdu2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tytygo/South_African_English?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * South African English - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think you have made great progress in working on this challenging article. I really like the information you all are adding and expanding on topics that need expanding such as its history and phonology. I would like to see a modified header with a better hook to the page. Perhaps a bit of a summary to introduce the reader to the article as a whole. I would also like to see charts for the vowels and consonants modeled after the IPA charts we have covered in class.