User:Tytygo/South African English/Jlia22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zabdu2, Lramir54, Zohaib Alvi, Tytygo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tytygo/South_African_English?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * South African English

Evaluate the drafted changes
Initially after reading the section in the main article, and then reading the sandbox, I think that the lead, (or sub-lead?), is very concise and does a great job of introducing the topic. I also feel that the rest of the contents from the current article have been adequately moved and integrated into the new content that you guys are writing. I think that a good improvement would be adding more about how either BSAE differs from other more standard varieties of English, and/or how it differs from standard SAE. I also think that if applicable, adding more detail to the grammar section would be good, if kept relatively concise. (This could even be in the same section as comparing BSAE to SAE or other Englishs). Overall I think the article draft is a great start, and I am personally excited to read it when it is complete!