User:Tytygo/South African English/Lexxdavv Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

South African English


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * South African English


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * South African English

Evaluate the drafted changes
Similar to how my article's lead looked in the beginning I feel like this lead needs some improving. I feel like the lead is very straight to the point and I think the article lacks that element. The lead is secondary to the title so I feel that it is vital to have a detailed lead and or history of the language to get a grasp of what I and or the reader will be continue reading. Also, the varieties section is on the article twice not sure if that's on purpose or mistake but it's a little conflicting because I feel like I should be seeing two different headings in they contain different info.