User:Tytygo/South African English/Marlem J. Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zohaib Alvi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * South African English

Evaluate the drafted changes
After taking a look at the history section, I think it gives a great overview on BSAE. It goes back to the very beginning and explains clearly how BSAE came to be. It's also nice that various descriptions are present, that gives the reader a deeper understanding on the details of BSAE. The very first sentence I think is a good opening sentence that gives general information that invites the reader to keep on reading.