User:Tytygo/South African English/Umnawahal Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tytygo/South African English


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tytygo/South_African_English?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

The draf was well written. Each piece of content was current and relevant to the subject. I appreciate how you provided just the right amount of grammar, history, and phonology related to the topic. The new information was supported by trustworthy sources; Although I appreciate that you included citations, some of them were unclear or not working. The article, in my opinion, was also logically organized, brief, straightforward, and simple to read. However, I think you didn't finish the last part that you wrote; It looked a little confusing to me. but overall you did a great job let me know if you have any questions.