User:Tzhennanguan/sandbox

"Article evaluation"

The article I have chosen is the White Sun of the Desert and everything in the article is relevant to explaining the plot of the movie and describing the impact the movie had in the Soviet Union during that time. Some of the language used to describe the plot was a little distracting but the overall message of the movie was clear. The citation worked fine and one of the issue is that some of the sources is in Russian and some are blogs which can lead to the accuracy of the article to be slightly less believable. The formatting of this the plot of the movie can be better and some of the link for actors does not exist but still leads to an empty page which can be confusing.

Overall, the page seems to be well cited and presents a unbiased view of the movie from reliable sources and the only issue the article has is that it could be formatted better.Tzhennanguan (talk) 06:44, 30 January 2018 (UTC)